How we can improve for our Thriller 'Fool's Paradise'.

Taking to account feedback and our own feelings towards our childrens film, we agreed that we need to improve on our Dialogue and Diegetic sound. During the filming of our Childrens film we did not have a script set up, so we improvised the script when we got to the set. We have realised this was a bad idea as preporation is key to filming to a set scheme. Also writing a script will enable us to highlight any negatives or problems in the script. We can also practice our dialogue before hand. Diegetic sound in our childrens film was an issue, especially during Liams monologue where we could hear a shower in the back groud, this made the dialogue harder to hear.