The opening was very good, but a bit long winded as there was a lot of time focused on the opening of doors, the girls scream was also very piercing which was not too realist and through headphones hurts a bit.
The overall plot was clear but having the bit with the girl being slightly transparent meant that it was had to tell what was going on.
Narrative focus' round murder, this is clear through sound and cuts of tied up girl.
Weakness is that the guy cannot remember what he wants to and is having dreams about it.
The protagonist is not seen in peril, but is seen suffering slightly with his thoughts.
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