Feedback from T2-53

The overall project is good and the intention of the piece is clear. The shots were varied and creative which allowed the audience to stay interested. The sound of the girl screaming was also very valuable in creating an eerie atmosphere and to help represent the story line. 

To improve this we would suggest less time focused on the 'opening of the doors' shot. It seemed too long and it looses the tension which is trying to be built up in this clip.

The clip used thriller characteristics and it was clearly shown that the story line was based on the murder of a girl in which the protagonist was the murderer.